Monday, 12 August 2013

Charlotte's Moment In Time (a self set task following work on this genre in class)



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While I am staring over the white- painted fence I start to notice a dog that looks like it is disguised as a tiger!
The bright yellow sun made it hard to see the half tiger but I am managing to see vibrant orange and black stripes on the dog’s tail, its tongue is sticking out! I am grabbing my camera out of my pocket and taking the best photo I can of this weird dog. (Well not much of a dog at all!). Just now my friend is walking up to me and saying “What on earth are you staring at?” she is asking. “That dog” I am answering. “It’s just like a tiger, I can smell its smelly doggy breath (Or shall I say tiger breath?) “So can I” I am answering. “It is now attacking us…” my friend is making up. I can hear it breathing hard as it is panting uncontrollably… it is scary! I can feel fear goose-bumps running down my arms. Now I am running into my house in fear.
 Thanks for reading my moment in time work.
By Charlotte
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18 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 August 2013 at 20:42

    Wow, alot of descriptive words Charlotte and such an imagination!

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  2. Anonymous15 August 2013 at 21:10

    wow that is a awesome dog man panited cool

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  3. Anonymous15 August 2013 at 21:15

    wow that is cool

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  4. Anonymous15 August 2013 at 21:22

    wow a lot stuff on the dog charlotte

    by Lyquan

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    1. Anonymous10 September 2013 at 21:53

      Thanks I'm glad you liked it
      Charlotte

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  5. Anonymous15 August 2013 at 21:31

    wow cool dog and lots of descriptive charlotte
    by Lyquan

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    1. Anonymous10 September 2013 at 21:55

      Thanks, you could do a post yourself... if you want!
      Charlotte

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  6. Timothy17 August 2013 at 21:43

    Great story Charlotte. I'm impressed! I like the part where you thought the dog was a tiger!

    From Timothy

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  7. Anonymous21 August 2013 at 22:10

    Great work Charlotte maybe you could be a professional athour someday who knows.

    keep up the good work

    By Matthew

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    1. Anonymous10 September 2013 at 21:58

      Thanks I want to be. I am writing my own stories at home, one day I might even share one.
      Charlotte
      P.S I think you're good to!

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  8. Anonymous2 September 2013 at 18:01

    wow fantastic work Charlotte keep it up


    by Abbie

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    1. Anonymous10 September 2013 at 22:00

      Thanks. I think you're so good you could be an author! You could post something!
      Charlotte

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  9. Tiffany19 September 2013 at 01:38

    Great adjectives Charlotte :)!

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  10. Alan23 September 2013 at 00:24

    Great work charlotte but keep it up.

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    1. Anonymous25 September 2013 at 20:50

      Thank you so much Alan and I will keep it up!
      From Charlotte

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  11. Willa26 September 2013 at 15:25

    Wow Charlotte that is fantastic:):)

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  12. Willa26 September 2013 at 15:29

    Wow Charlotte you got a lot of adjecitives

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  13. Room 18 October 2013 at 15:26

    Cool story, where did you get this picture from?
    Your blog is great Mrs V!

    Helen S

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